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I've been in a very curious mood these past few days. I wrote this earlier today and thought it was interesting.
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Race of Love

You can find me at the riverbed
where we used to laugh and dance
The water's singing if you listen
it's whispering another chance 
It couldn't be any more real
as real as the sun feels on your face 
How come in this race of love
we both end up in second place
If this is how it ends then
let us end on the highest of notes 
I'm holding on the these binds
that are all I've ever known 

The ripples in the stream tell me everything 
Is that twilight in the sky or am I just imagining 
A better place that we once held close and dear 
We would be ones to embrace the praise and fear 
We're tied for second place in this race of love 

Whenever soft push comes to shove why 
are we knocked down to our knees 
I'm not one to complain but I'd refrain
from using false happiness on me 
They used to say forever's a thing
that can live and endure it all
I'm starting to question that saying
as I watch our chances fall

The ripples in the stream tell me everything 
Is that twilight in the sky or am I just imagining 
A better place that we once held close and dear 
We would be ones to embrace the praise and fear 
We're tied for second place in this race of love 
We're tied for second place in this race of love 

There's something in your eye,
a glimmer of what if and what can't be
I can see it from across the stars 
and it's all that I want to believe 

The ripples in the stream tell me everything 
Is that twilight in the sky or am I just imagining 
A better place that we once held close and dear 
We would be ones to embrace the praise and fear 
We're tied for second place in this race of love 
We're tied for second place in this race of love 

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Jeremiah N.
Artist | Hobbyist | Varied
United States
Loved one's back home all crying cause they're already missing me
I pray by the grace of God that there's somebody listening
Give me a chance to be that person I wanna be
Oh lord I'll try so hard but you've gotta let go of me

Current Residence: Desolation Row
Favourite genre of music: Modern/Alternative/Punk
Favourite photographer: Lakitu
Favourite style of art: Abstract/Illusions
Operating System: Mac OSX Yosemite
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xBecksterr Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
Thanks for the watch! ^^
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EkoGlitch Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2011
Hey~. :iconbluetardwaveplz:
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22ndGuN Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Hey
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EkoGlitch Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2011
How are you today? Night.. Morning... 8D
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22ndGuN Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Pretty good, and yourself? (:
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frizzymissizzy Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2011
wow, thank you so much for the watch!!!
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Verenique Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2011
Thanks for the deviantwatch! :-)
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HecateHerz Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2011
thanks for the watch =)
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Karolusdiversion Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2011
Hello. Thank you very much for :+devwatch:ing me
I really appreciate it. :)
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MODDEYDOO Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
Many thanks for the watch :D
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